- When citing your career plans on your resume itself, keep it to one paragraph. Alternatively, compose an well thought out cover letter which dictates your interesets, and a bold statement about your ability to be what that company needs I love when I read a cover letter and theperson is forward enough to say something like"With my experience and enthusiasm I know I am the right candidate for the job."
- remove the forums link, they won't care. Applications have hit my desk with such information. Makes no impact whatsoever.
- check for spelling mistakes
- "which I believe is the second best ever for this city" - you should post a fact, not a belief, back up your claims.
- "Highly educated in the area of electronics and audio" provide details as to which areas you are educated in, provide educational backups to that statement
- list references & contacts, especially if you worked at a University, Professors are suprisingly helpful in this area.
- "Helping in activities like the Walk For Kids and many other's " what are the many others? Be more specific. Possible employers love volunteers, especially when they know which activity you volunteer for, it shows something about your character and personal traits. Both are positive influences in landing a job.
- replace "flying and flight" with aviation.
Also, I realise this is just a rough layout and it will most likely change many times, but you should clean it up a little, use pertinent categories and bullets for point form data to give a more clean look and overall more functional appearance to your resume. If you wish, I can later post up an example of a person who gave me his resume, whom I hired the same day, not only due to his experience and ability, but for how he laid out his resume to me.
Good luck.
- remove the forums link, they won't care. Applications have hit my desk with such information. Makes no impact whatsoever.
- check for spelling mistakes
- "which I believe is the second best ever for this city" - you should post a fact, not a belief, back up your claims.
- "Highly educated in the area of electronics and audio" provide details as to which areas you are educated in, provide educational backups to that statement
- list references & contacts, especially if you worked at a University, Professors are suprisingly helpful in this area.
- "Helping in activities like the Walk For Kids and many other's " what are the many others? Be more specific. Possible employers love volunteers, especially when they know which activity you volunteer for, it shows something about your character and personal traits. Both are positive influences in landing a job.
- replace "flying and flight" with aviation.
Also, I realise this is just a rough layout and it will most likely change many times, but you should clean it up a little, use pertinent categories and bullets for point form data to give a more clean look and overall more functional appearance to your resume. If you wish, I can later post up an example of a person who gave me his resume, whom I hired the same day, not only due to his experience and ability, but for how he laid out his resume to me.
Good luck.