Try to keep it on one page, the people who are looking for employee's don't want to read your whole life story, they dont want to know your dogs name nor if you actually have a dog, try keep it short as possible - you want the employeer to read your resume and then when they put it down and continue reading other peoples resumes for them to be still thinking about yours, also you may add that you can socialize, that you go out on a regular basis - this is giving the impression that you can work with people, that you can also work well groups, teams. If you added socialize in the resume the job may have work organizations where they go out to the town or a party, its not going to have a good affect if you dont like to speak to people or go out.
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Also I am considering a job in the professional audio equipment area
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Correct It Too: "I am also considering a job", if you are applying towards a audio equipment job then add this but if you are applying to work as a BinMan, why the hell does he want to know this? They could think - is this just a job until he can find a better one? If so, whats the point in hiring him? There isn't a point.
You also need to change the layout of the CV (Resume), it's far to messy, if I looked at that... well infact I wouldn't look at it, it's all about first impressions. Make the frist impression and you are garentee'd a better chance for the job also your appearence is of the upmost importance if you actually get the interview, but you don't need to know that yet (Post back if you do get the job interview though)
Also add in your "Current Skills" you are good with word processing, databasing and excel. By all means do not add Microsoft or any branded names if possible keep them to an alternative name: Mircosoft Word 2003 should be Word Processing, etc. I can't remeber why you don't use branded names but you don't as told by my teachers and others.
Edit this too: I build my own computers and I have 4 in my house and are used to fixing all of their problems.
To: I can now build my own computers, I currently have four in my household that are used for repairng, tweaking and testing the hardware and the software.
Include the dates in which you attended school. xx/xx/xx
Also name any grades you have gotten, from school or college etc, they like to know they are hiring a overall smart person not just a person who is good at this, they also want to know he is good at that.
Also what is this? - CoD, CS:S \ HL2
M - What if the person you are applying too doesn't play games? What if you are applying to a Game Store but they don't play games or they use different names? Also I am A DJ? wtf is this? you are a DJ that DJ's what, are you good at it? what songs have you made/producced if any? are you actually thinking about becoming a DJ? I would leave this out or extend on it, make it more interesting.
RE-Post the edited version's and we can give you more advise.
*Read here, I'll try edit it as often as I can think of something or spot a fault