poem i wrote today (i aint no poet but.....read if ur bored)

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bigfatfrickinfa

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jennifer i like you (i changed thename for personal reasons)
i know it sounds imature the way it came out but its true
and the things you do
i like to think of you
when i close my eyes and fantasize about waking up by your side
under the sheets you and me
i think about that
its my fantasy
bring you camping
swimming and tanning
rolling in the grass and laughing
about all the stupid things happening
in my life
its freeing my mind
sitting under the stars with you
theres nothing i rather do
and you know what
im in love with you
because of the things you say and do
youre better than smoking up and drinking booze
can i take you on a date
ill pick you up at 8
bring you back home
you fell asleep in the car
ill unlock the door make your bed
pick you up and bring you to your room and give you a kiss on the forehead
undress you and dress you again
ur in your pyjamas now well cuddle up
and mabye if you wwake up well make sweet love
 

DefragMyHead

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not bad, but if you REALLY loved her youd just give her 2600 dollars. Since we're being all romantic and stuff, here's a poem I wrote.

I recall, my lover's eyes gleamed stark last I saw
breathing life into my soul, beneath the moon last fall.
"Tomorrow," I reluctantly said, and bid farewell with just a kiss.
Now, with regret, I'll forever miss...
And've been alone ever since.
Tragedy struck when we departed.
Now, and forever, am I brokenhearted.
NB
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bigfatfrickinfa

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DefragMyHead said:
not bad, but if you REALLY loved her youd just give her 2600 dollars. Since we're being all romantic and stuff, here's a poem I wrote.

I recall, my lover's eyes gleamed stark last I saw
breathing life into my soul, beneath the moon last fall.
"Tomorrow," I reluctantly said, and bid farewell with just a kiss.
Now, with regret, I'll forever miss...
And've been alone ever since.
Tragedy struck when we departed.
Now, and forever, am I brokenhearted.
NB
..

lol
 

bonehelm

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Love poems are super-dee-duper lame. If you love a person so much, just go tell her/him that. Make sure you yell it out very loud so that everyone on the street looks at you.

Read the profanity rules
 

bigfatfrickinfa

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bonehelm said:
Love poems are super-dee-duper lame. If you love a person so much, just go tell her/him that. Make sure you yell it out very loud so that everyone on the street looks at you.


true......i didnt want ppl dissing my poem....some ppl like poetry......and i do tell my gf i love her...and not only when i want something.....but i wrote this poem.......just beause ....idunno i was in a writing mood
 

DefragMyHead

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bonehelm said:
Love poems are f**king lame. If you love a person so much, just go tell her/him that. Make sure you yell it out very loud so that everyone on the street looks at you.

yea and stand outside her bedroom window with a boombox over your head blaring a peter gabriel song.
 
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