ok here is a website template I just made for a contest, I need some suggestions and or ratings. There is also a flash that goes with it if someone would be generous enough to let me upload it to their webserver I would show you.
it looks too plain, like its halfway done. the top logo looks like you just dropped one of your previous work into it. there is no flow , it looks out of place. more work is needed to improve it, but you have a good start.