Could someone proofread for me?

[Emily]

I'm submitting this paper with my project for the [geek]CA State Science Fair[/geek] and I'm looking for some other geeks to proofread it for me and give me some suggestions. It's about 10 pages so you can skim if you want to. Thanks!

 

[horndude]

Looks good to me,clear,concise, and straight to the point.I didnt see any typo's or glaring problems.Interesting topic.

good luck,hope you do well

 

[macdude425]

Looks good to me too; nothing sticks out and smacks me upside the head.

Good luck.

 

[Emily]

Thanks for the comments.