well I haven't been reading in these forums besides in OT for quite some time.
I understand what you're going for in the picture and all, and considering it was the main focus of the picture I figured you were trying to get that to come out, but it's still too grainy, and towards the right of their logo it goes blurry and IMO it needs to be more centered....
I do see what you're going for and all though...are you allowed to alter the image in anyway? Not like completely changing it but like, crop it to a certain size or anything like that